Animation of Ideas

I recently went to Inman Connect in San Francisco. Tons of great Ideas and very smart people talking about RE issues. One of the most compelling items for me was the use of animation to convey ideas in a very fun way. We have all the equipment so we decided to write a script and try it. I would love feedback on this first attempt. Does it hold your attention? does it convey a message? What is the message? is it entertaining? thanks for the help:)